This is our final video without changing some parts to black and white. We have cropped the parts out where we had black socks showing on our model and also made our narrative more apparent by having the sad scenes at the beggining of the video to show her sadness over the loss of her relationship then happiness towards the end to show her independence. This links to our image we have used in our ancillary tasks as we have also used this going from sadness to powerful and independent idea.

"fantastic piece of work.  Beautiful setting and with so many very close up shots that are hard to get and still  look brilliant, but you do it.  Good lip syncing throughout most of the video. development would be some kind of colour edit." This was a comment from someone who showed our video.