These two images are of the magazine advertisement that we have to create, we first started with this first image but decided that we needed some colour to draw the audiences attention more as the poster wasnt very eye catching. We then added a top and bottom border to the poster in a light blue colour as we thought this would attract peoples attention without completely taking all attention from the text and imagery.

AUDIENCE FEEDBACK:

Positive comments

It is really effective

Bold, very dramatic

The two faces look professional

Very Eye-catching and professional effects

Negative comments:

Couldn't see some of the writing
some of the font could be darker
Need a year next to September
The writing needs to be enhanced

After recieving this feedback we have concluded that we need to work on making some of the writing more visable and will as a year to the dates.

 

 

We then decided that where we have written "plus guests" wasnt very easy to see or read so we have beveled and embossed it and also given is a shadowed effect but are still unsure to wether it is easier to read. We have also beveled and embossed the other text as we though this would help to make the writing easier to see. We have also given the title "MOMENTUM" a gradient as this catches your eye even more.